Carbonzicium Lollypops Final cut

This is the final cut of our opening sequence, since our rough cut we have re-filmed pretty much everything and the overall length of the footage had to be cut from around four minuets to what it is now. We re-filmed so that there is a better use of mise en scene and so that the lighting is more appropriate to the genre. We also tried to make the narrative of the sequence more clear as that was one of the criticisms we revived when our sequence was first shown.

Rough cut

This is our rough cut we have since improved it by re filming everything whilst trying to keep the narrative the same whilst improving the continuity, titles and the mise en scene. Also in this rough version the footage stops abruptly as all was not edited. This version also doesn't feature any music as that was also still being created.

Animatic

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This is our original animatic its shows our original story board for our film it features the shot types and and narrative of our original idea. Since this was created we have considerably changed our film for the better as we found this to be unrealistic.

Evaluation

Evaluation on Prezi